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dragonoz Featured By Owner May 4, 2015  Student General Artist
@00:18awwww. puppy wanna cuddle.
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GhostAttorney Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
@02:12That's stellar - well done! Nice poses, great silhouettes and line of action throughout the whole piece. Love the expressions on both dogs.

I don't usually offer criticism on here, as I really prefer lurking but i really like your piece, and I noticed one quick thing you could do to improve it overall. At around 1:22, you've got the one-eyed dog face-palming, then you've got him face-palming again at 1:47. I think if you change the first face-palm thumbnail at 1:22 to an expression instead, I think that variation will help improve that dog's already great performance. Not to mention it would only be a 5 minute fix for something that recruiters and animation directors/supervisors are probably gonna notice.

Anyway, just my 2 cents. I really like it and the rest of your work on here. Cheers.
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Did Concept Design Academy’s “Cinematic Storyboarding” with Jane Wu this past couple months. It was a really engaging class and I came away with a few good projects to show off. This one was easiest to edit together.
The assignment was “there are two people in a waiting room. What happens?”

There’s no sound. It’s just an animatic. Feel free to generate your own sound effects though. Bap, splat, wuff, and yip are good to start with.
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dragonoz Featured By Owner May 4, 2015  Student General Artist
@00:18awwww. puppy wanna cuddle.
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Katakire Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
How long did this one particular film take to make? You said you collaborated? was it just two of you? also did you use flash and hand draw or computer draw all the images?
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FablePaint Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014  Professional Filmographer
This isn't a collaboration, this was 100% me. And I hand-drew the images directly into the computer.
I'd say the boarding took like a couple days and the animatic itself was thrown together in a few hours.
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Katakire Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Oh it was just you.  it didn't really take you that long? What program did you use? Its a very impressive piece :)
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FablePaint Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014  Professional Filmographer
I believe I did it all in Photoshop. It's not great for boarding in though. Nowadays I use Manga Studio EX5. It handles large sequential files a lot better and the draw tools feel more natural (like if Painttool Sai grew up).
The speed it took me is a bit weird. I'm a fast artist. But also I had boarded professionally before this, so I was just refining skills  for this class. Came out with some good work though and feeling a bit more confident about wanting to do it professionally consistently.
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Katakire Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Oh nice! I was considering doing something similar to this as a final for a class I was taking but it was color theory so I would have to take the animation a bit further and she wouldn't let me get away without sound either so Id have to do that as well. Anyway ended up writing a printing a children book lol.

This is an awesome animation you should be very proud! I hope to be able to create something like this in the future myself. I might do it in my spare time over christmas break because I feel like i should be doing something....this is my first weekend without 3 projects to be working on haha!

anyway very impressed with your work :)
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RFakonWolf Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014
OMG this is so cute! XD
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Keithalia Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Omg so cute! It made made day!
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AuroraIkia Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That was SO cute OMG. I love it!
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ksj7700 Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can totally relate to this! My dog just got her eye out the other day, and we all know Dog Hospitals are the least fun.
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321Laraly123 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I love it <3
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dragonchild14 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist
hahahah, that was great !!! amazing animation !!
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Riverovstyx Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The ending was so sweet I teared up
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Lyrak Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Is that meant to look like Ada or am I just seeing what I want to see? XD

But fff this is cute.
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FablePaint Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Professional Filmographer
Yep! Cutie, as that character is called, is basically tall-Ada
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Totalmeep Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013
Erin, this is incredible!  Awesome staging!  How long did this take you to do?
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FablePaint Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Professional Filmographer
About three days or so for the boards themselves, a day or two for the thumbnails
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GhostAttorney Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
@02:12That's stellar - well done! Nice poses, great silhouettes and line of action throughout the whole piece. Love the expressions on both dogs.

I don't usually offer criticism on here, as I really prefer lurking but i really like your piece, and I noticed one quick thing you could do to improve it overall. At around 1:22, you've got the one-eyed dog face-palming, then you've got him face-palming again at 1:47. I think if you change the first face-palm thumbnail at 1:22 to an expression instead, I think that variation will help improve that dog's already great performance. Not to mention it would only be a 5 minute fix for something that recruiters and animation directors/supervisors are probably gonna notice.

Anyway, just my 2 cents. I really like it and the rest of your work on here. Cheers.
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sifyro Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Student Filmographer
I can't see :c
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TheMysteryPony Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
omg this is the best XD
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UbiOokami23 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is a cool animation i love the expressions 
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LeDaverix Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it's not easy to be Little :D
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Oflobuscus Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
That was awesome best animation ever
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Sedillio Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is done amazingly well, I love the motion and point of view! The expressions are spot on, you don't even really need to add sound because I got the whole story loud and clear just by watching :D Though I hope you do get a chance to complete this someday :3
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painted-flamingo Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
Really fantastic work, doesn't need sound those expressions tell the story all on their own 
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paintitblack54 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
It works really well as a short piece, I think it'd be worthwhile for you to add sound, possibly some color. If only to see that you can, and to have a piece like this in your portfolio.
Plus, you know I'd love to see that :P
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minislip6 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
That's adorable. Simply adorable.
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KanuTGL Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Haha, that's lovely :D The expressions on the pug are brilliant!
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wikigiuli Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Professional General Artist
this is sooooo cute!!! and i love the dynamic of the scene!
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Manar-Darkwing Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Gods. I love it. Had me laughing up a fit. And I really do find the ending part to be absolutely hilarious. HA! Pay backs a bitch as they say.
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RabidSavagekin Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww! This is adorable, do you have any plans on actually finishing this work? Adding sounds and whatnot? :o 
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FablePaint Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Possibly. depends how much energy I got for it
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Awesomedudeperson Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
*GIVES ALL THE ENERGY*
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HowlingGuardian Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
It's... a pirate puppy. That's brilliant!

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