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December 23, 2013
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:iconghostattorney:
@02:12That's stellar - well done! Nice poses, great silhouettes and line of action throughout the whole piece. Love the expressions on both dogs.

I don't usually offer criticism on here, as I really prefer lurking but i really like your piece, and I noticed one quick thing you could do to improve it overall. At around 1:22, you've got the one-eyed dog face-palming, then you've got him face-palming again at 1:47. I think if you change the first face-palm thumbnail at 1:22 to an expression instead, I think that variation will help improve that dog's already great performance. Not to mention it would only be a 5 minute fix for something that recruiters and animation directors/supervisors are probably gonna notice.

Anyway, just my 2 cents. I really like it and the rest of your work on here. Cheers.
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Did Concept Design Academy’s “Cinematic Storyboarding” with Jane Wu this past couple months. It was a really engaging class and I came away with a few good projects to show off. This one was easiest to edit together.
The assignment was “there are two people in a waiting room. What happens?”

There’s no sound. It’s just an animatic. Feel free to generate your own sound effects though. Bap, splat, wuff, and yip are good to start with.
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:icon321laraly123:
321Laraly123 Feb 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I love it <3
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:icondragonchild14:
hahahah, that was great !!! amazing animation !!
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Riverovstyx Jan 15, 2014  Student Filmographer
The ending was so sweet I teared up
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Lyrak Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Is that meant to look like Ada or am I just seeing what I want to see? XD

But fff this is cute.
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FablePaint Jan 4, 2014  Professional Filmographer
Yep! Cutie, as that character is called, is basically tall-Ada
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:icontotalmeep:
Erin, this is incredible!  Awesome staging!  How long did this take you to do?
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FablePaint Dec 24, 2013  Professional Filmographer
About three days or so for the boards themselves, a day or two for the thumbnails
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:iconghostattorney:
@02:12That's stellar - well done! Nice poses, great silhouettes and line of action throughout the whole piece. Love the expressions on both dogs.

I don't usually offer criticism on here, as I really prefer lurking but i really like your piece, and I noticed one quick thing you could do to improve it overall. At around 1:22, you've got the one-eyed dog face-palming, then you've got him face-palming again at 1:47. I think if you change the first face-palm thumbnail at 1:22 to an expression instead, I think that variation will help improve that dog's already great performance. Not to mention it would only be a 5 minute fix for something that recruiters and animation directors/supervisors are probably gonna notice.

Anyway, just my 2 cents. I really like it and the rest of your work on here. Cheers.
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sifyro Dec 23, 2013  Student Filmographer
I can't see :c
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TheMysteryPony Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
omg this is the best XD
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